I like yours - re-reading what I just wrote, I think it's probably still giving too much of it away. lol. Maybe the final cut would get rid of the mention of fighting with a blindfold to be more vague. That and the part about a blindfold that would never come off..
So this:
My brother can do this. And he's a much better fighter than me. That thought should steady him, but it doesn’t.
The fear of forever brought a sensation of ice daggers needling into his gut. This was his world now. Forever.
He clutched harder at his knees. Darkness. Strange smells, sensations, sounds... too much of all of them to make any real sense in any way that matters.
If he is capable of doing this to me, what could he do to my brother? His heart raced faster. It was that thought that made him feel for the edge of the cot bed and swing to put both feet on the floor.
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Re: Where Matt has a real identical twin named Mike who is sighted and is Daredevil
Date: 2016-04-24 05:50 am (UTC)So this:
My brother can do this. And he's a much better fighter than me. That thought should steady him, but it doesn’t.
The fear of forever brought a sensation of ice daggers needling into his gut. This was his world now. Forever.
He clutched harder at his knees. Darkness. Strange smells, sensations, sounds... too much of all of them to make any real sense in any way that matters.
If he is capable of doing this to me, what could he do to my brother? His heart raced faster. It was that thought that made him feel for the edge of the cot bed and swing to put both feet on the floor.
“I’m ready.”