I was thinking - the reader doesn't know if we kept the original timeline or not - so I think we might be able to leave the blindfold stuff in. (Maybe they might wonder if Stick got to them before Matt was blinded? Then again, the reader would probably wonder what would put them on his radar without Matt being blind... And, there isn't anything, that we know of.) (I kind of toy with the idea of Stick knowing their mother. LOL.)
I do like this whole Mike's first experiences being blinded thing. Stick's any means to end philosophy is chilling.
Maybe we could skip around to show his 'world on fire' starting to ignite? Or maybe some of the messed up training Stick puts him though? Or some of Mike's despair at knowing everything he's going to miss out on? (Maybe afterwards he goes to the Met. LOL Ohh... and he could arrange to take Matt to one of their touch collection sessions... That, maybe they talk about in the dialogue? Maybe as a sort of lead in... 'Remember that time when I...?')
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Re: Where Matt has a real identical twin named Mike who is sighted and is Daredevil
Date: 2016-04-24 02:33 pm (UTC)I do like this whole Mike's first experiences being blinded thing. Stick's any means to end philosophy is chilling.
Maybe we could skip around to show his 'world on fire' starting to ignite? Or maybe some of the messed up training Stick puts him though? Or some of Mike's despair at knowing everything he's going to miss out on? (Maybe afterwards he goes to the Met. LOL Ohh... and he could arrange to take Matt to one of their touch collection sessions... That, maybe they talk about in the dialogue? Maybe as a sort of lead in... 'Remember that time when I...?')