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I think I'd keep it more or less in order, but not have it as one long scene broken up throughout the story, if that makes sense?
Like maybe skip from where we're at to some of the training. Then maybe to more training, because there'd be loads of that. To Mike starting to notice things he didn't before. Maybe then to more training, growing in confidence and getting better. Maybe Stick coming to him one night and telling him he's proud of him because he know's it's not easy but that he's going to thank him for this in a few years - Mike doesn't believe him, but he still thinks its permanent. Then maybe Mike figuring out some of the other stuff by himself, because Stick doesn't bother teaching him how to do more normal things without vision. Then maybe a scene at the end where he's properly kicking ass and pretty pleased with himself, but still feeling pretty crappy about what's been deliberately done to him.
I like the idea of this kind of bringing Mike and Matt closer. I think the Mike that comes back from the special training will be a pretty different one from the guy that left. I'd maybe leave it a few weeks while he recovers from his ordeal, and then yeah, he could start trying to do stuff like that for Matt, who might be slightly baffled because it's a bit out of character for his brother.
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Re: Where Matt has a real identical twin named Mike who is sighted and is Daredevil
Date: 2016-04-24 03:02 pm (UTC)I think I'd keep it more or less in order, but not have it as one long scene broken up throughout the story, if that makes sense?
Like maybe skip from where we're at to some of the training. Then maybe to more training, because there'd be loads of that. To Mike starting to notice things he didn't before. Maybe then to more training, growing in confidence and getting better. Maybe Stick coming to him one night and telling him he's proud of him because he know's it's not easy but that he's going to thank him for this in a few years - Mike doesn't believe him, but he still thinks its permanent. Then maybe Mike figuring out some of the other stuff by himself, because Stick doesn't bother teaching him how to do more normal things without vision. Then maybe a scene at the end where he's properly kicking ass and pretty pleased with himself, but still feeling pretty crappy about what's been deliberately done to him.
I like the idea of this kind of bringing Mike and Matt closer. I think the Mike that comes back from the special training will be a pretty different one from the guy that left. I'd maybe leave it a few weeks while he recovers from his ordeal, and then yeah, he could start trying to do stuff like that for Matt, who might be slightly baffled because it's a bit out of character for his brother.